Description
Alexis and Mitty are third year students at Haldwell University. Alexis is a lonely, jaded girl who just wants friends. Mitty is a reserved, standoffish girl who struggles with expressing herself. One day, the two of them are paired up to critique each other's work for the semester. Now forced to spend time together thanks to this assignment, will the two learn to become friends, or will both their grades and their relationship crash and burn?
This story takes place in Vistus, a fantastical yet modern world of anthropomorphic creatures and magic. Sugar and Spice focuses on the modern, urban side.
Cover art by me, text designed by Krickis!
Nothing's been added yet!
Come back later when there's something to read.
9 comments
MagicalBun
SigmasonicX said:
Hey there! Since I don't believe you're on the Discord, I just wanted to check in and see if you had any issues uploading this story.
Hi there! No issues to report, the entire process went smoothly.
Krickis
Just finished chapter one and I love it so far! You write very well, and your narrative prose is very enjoyable. I loved the “when did she become so… dark chocolatey?” bit, it got a good laugh from me. Looking forward to reading the rest!
MagicalBun
Krickis said:
Just finished chapter one and I love it so far! You write very well, and your narrative prose is very enjoyable. I loved the “when did she become so… dark chocolatey?” bit, it got a good laugh from me. Looking forward to reading the rest!
Aah thank you, I'm so glad to hear it! :D
Krickis
All caught up! Loving the slow build here, and I can't wait to see more of this ^^
SigmasonicX
(Chapter 6)
(Chapter-specific comments are coming soon-ish, BTW)
This story is really cute! Loved the text exchange in chapter 5. I notice that Mitty's design is pretty similar to Utena (Revolutionary Girl Utena); intentional reference?
Also, I hadn't considered this when you posted the first three chapters, since I didn't think it was in progress, but is this a brand new story and not a repost? In that case, then it qualifies for the Offprint Outreach event, and I'll be willing to donate $20 to one of the listed charities. Since you aren't in the Discord server, you can reply with the charity here.
MagicalBun
SigmasonicX said:
(Chapter 6)
(Chapter-specific comments are coming soon-ish, BTW)This story is really cute! Loved the text exchange in chapter 5. I notice that Mitty's design is pretty similar to Utena (Revolutionary Girl Utena); intentional reference?
Also, I hadn't considered this when you posted the first three chapters, since I didn't think it was in progress, but is this a brand new story and not a repost? In that case, then it qualifies for the Offprint Outreach event, and I'll be willing to donate $20 to one of the listed charities. Since you aren't in the Discord server, you can reply with the charity here.
Thank you so much! Mitty's design isn't based on anything in particular so it's completely unintentional, but Utena does have a great design.
Ah, this story is a repost, though it is currently in progress, so I didn't think it qualified for the event.
SigmasonicX
MagicalBun said:
Thank you so much! Mitty's design isn't based on anything in particular so it's completely unintentional, but Utena does have a great design.
Ah, this story is a repost, though it is currently in progress, so I didn't think it qualified for the event.
Got it
SigmasonicX
Oh dang. lots of updates since I last checked. Might be a bit until I catch up, lol.
Hey there! Since I don't believe you're on the Discord, I just wanted to check in and see if you had any issues uploading this story.