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The Frozen Lake

by Krickis
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Even children know not to go on the frozen lake.


Written for SigmasonicX's charity fic drive.

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4 comments
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SigmasonicX
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This was pretty good! A nice short horror tale.

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MagicalBun
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Ooh this was a good read! Fond of the direct style used, particularly with the repetition. Has a kind of cadence to it.

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Krickis
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SigmasonicX said:

This was pretty good! A nice short horror tale.

Thank you ^^ I'm not much of a horror writer, but I got the prompt “strange, eerie, and cold” and instantly thought it would make a cool creepy mermaid story.

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Krickis
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MagicalBun said:

Ooh this was a good read! Fond of the direct style used, particularly with the repetition. Has a kind of cadence to it.

Thank you! I became a big fan of repetition when playing Undertale, and have been trying to find ways to incorporate it into my writing.